Extremely boring. It's basically a rehash of coiling dragon. What's with all the zero chapter read five star reviews dominating the front page...My biggest problems with the story are pacing, followed by poor world building and one dimensional characters.Mentioning a city with tens of millions of people, how many thousands of cities, provinces, worlds and star systems there are do not equat to world building. You have to show that the world around you matters. Did your mc lost his flying bison in a city and it's so vast you can't find it? If not, than it doesn't matter how many hundreds of millions of people are in the city, they are but numbers and irrelevant and GOD, is the entire world in this story so irrelevant! It seems like nothing is happening in the world unless the mc is interacting with it. There are no sense of realism there. Mc lives in a castle, goes to some other castle, kills someone as a mission, comes back, mopes around in his castle because that's how you run a city, and voila he's the strongest in the world and goes to some place and...God the story lacks pacing and so many poorly done time skips. Show that passing of time matters before you do a time skip, not just when you need a powerup and can't find a way to engage your readers. ISSTH did a hundred year skip and I wasn't mad because before that I was with the mc on his day to day adventure, learning how important a day can be. And god the time skips in this story are so lame. He basically goes from zero to hevean rank in a few dozon chapters and heaven to legend in a couple more and by a hundred he achieves transcendence, the level that author introduced to be strongest at the start of the story. How do you keep writing once you've done that? Why, do a dbz twist, introduce a few more levels.And do you know how many interesting things happen to his life in the time he gets op as fk? You can count them on one finger, that's four if you are lazy, and god this story is so lazily written!You know, you can still feed on a lazily written, poorly paced story in a vacuum world, if the characters and their banters make up for it, and believe it or not, author fks that up really spectacularly. The characters have no depth, no complexity, no autonomy, no agency. They just exist to fill up a space. The two loving parents that got in trouble to motivate the mc, the cute lil bro to motivate the mc, the backstabbing gal to motivate the mc and hype the mysogonist fan base, none of them serves any other purpose and once you realise how utterly robotic and dull the characters are, how do you connect with them in any way? At least make up for their lack of personality with quips or humor but no, it's a serious story. A seriously dull story.And fk this Alice trope. When you have less personality than a side character with no dialogue, you don't get the girl, deal with with.
The translation quality is quite good but the story ruins it. Literally, I feel like the mc is just a bit too stupid and it doesn't fit his ten thousand some year mental age. Most of the side characters and cannon fodders are 1D. The World Background could be described in one word infinite. Like the author could write 1 million chapters on the world itself. There is no real goal in the novel besides take revenge for every petty little things the mc had suffer in his previous life. We are talking about 10000 years of history here. All in all this novel is just trash. Garbage worse than Trump's Coronavirus prevention campaign.
This is a good story, with good development and world background. But i think it needs an editor. this story can be evolved to like monster paradise if author want it. Just give it a personal touch It's nearly three weeks and still no sign of coming back. NEED MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!
i recommend better character development of the mc n i would like to ask why is the mc kinda dumb? well no offence and so that why im giving this a chance to upgrade so keep up the good work ◉‿◉ just remember he's an S class adventurer ok?
"Tae---Oh my... How can you be so goo----Ohh!" I moaned repeatedly as I arched my back while tugging onto his hair. He leaned to my ear again. "Your my first in this too but since I watched every night. Tonight is the perfect time to try it out with you. My love" he said licking jaw afterwards.
That same day would be the first expedition to the surface, something that kept Ethan excited and energetic although the situation could change as soon as he first observed the surface of the new world, stepping on the remains of the old one.
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