An Empty Room

1. Characters are sloppy. Main character in particular can't seem to control himself and the author's portrayal of him is shaky as **** as his character changes from chapter to chapter, going from unsteady in one chapter to professional assassin in another with no foreshadowing. Similarly, plot line forces MC to make MANY MANY STUPID decisions for him to end with "I need to learn how to do xxxx better next time." Guess what happens when next time comes. It horribly idiotic and it never stops even after 200 chapters. Other characters are more consistent, but that has more to do with they being 1 dimensional rather than author's abilities. 2. word selection by author is awkward and the way they address each other can get on your nerves. 3. Story development is also non-existent. MC has little to no goals other than to graduate from academy and presumably slack off somewhere. His character however does not match as he can suddenly get hot blooded, suddenly fiery, and then regret once the fight is over because he showed off too much. Note that this does not change and he continues to do stupid things to show off repeatedly to no benefit whatsoever.

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Thanks for the chapter and more chapters

"Hehehe, I escaped on time!"(Ethan)

Alex was weirded out. Why would Elaine say that?

It wasn't until Ai was unable to take any more and he passed out that Wang finally stopped, laying next to the tired out male with a great mood. He snuggled his little fox while still being inside of him and fell asleep.

So much to do, so much to see

Keep up the half sexy half serious suff your doing I get a good laugh and get going with this series. I hope it continues for a bunch of chapters

Thanks for the current upload, much appreciated. What about your other book “Don’t Panic, I have a Spiritual Spring Farm”?  Is it going to be updated. Are these two novels published in another platform?

As the author, I'm unabashedly giving my book a five-star rating—after all, if you can't cheer for your own creation, who will?If you're asking whether this book falls into the Harem genre, then yes, it does, and if you're curious about fan service, there will be some. However, the story will not concentrate on these part.Additionally, if you're inquiring whether the main character is overpowered (OP), he indeed is. Even without the system, he can survive due to his photographic memory and his quick adaptability.Additionally, this book's setting won't be an ordinary island, it will possess a magical quality, yet not to the extent of having universal powers capable of destroying worlds or similar feats.Should you have any questions, feel free to comment below to share your thoughts, and if possible, please leave a review. :D

It's a good story. Although the start is a bit bland, once you go further, you will find it more interesting. Hope the story gets updates regularly!