Am I A Guy?

Good grammar but the average " I'm bullied " cultivation story. The coin ability looks really nice which is why I wanted to give it a try but I simply can't. It just looks like the same old Chinese cliche. I would recommend those that are into " cultivation " to Defenitely give it a try. For those that aren't, I simply wouldn't bother.

review will probably get deleted becquse webnovel is a trash site but I'll write this anyway.I really enjoyed the start of this novel but as you can probably already tell the novel starts to go down hill with each reincarnation. there are two main things that cause the novel digress: one, the author spend less time filtering out useless Chinese propaganda, and two, the author strips away the characters goals and replaces them with the plots of well know novels.The first point isn't really that important as I'm sure we're all used to reading the Chinese propaganda these authors force into their novels by now, but the second point is the real issue. Start from the third reincarnation the protagonist begins to forget is goal in going into these worlds and starts to act like the protagonists you would see in other novels like being overlycautious for no reason, sparing enemy because they're not worth it, and ignoring the chaos in front of them just so they can face slap at the end.As a little add-on, although the supporting characters were never very important in this novel during the fourth reincarnation, the author turns everyone one into idiots. Despite being taught by the protagonist these characters will making any excuses not to help the situation and let it continue to boil until they can no longer do anything, and it's all left to the protagonist. it was fine at the start, but it just felt so forced I almost tore my hair out.

finally a different style if it doesn't gets picked then it's wastednow most of the novels are genetic and the mc is too overpowered there's no sense of satisfaction the mc grows at God like rate and the novels over all face slapping and it's boring now after reading more of them so hope this isn't one of those generic ones

can do better,......................

The fact that you can make a fight so exhilarating is amazing and the plot line is pretty good as well. I also love how you made the character have good potential but has flaws like a normal human being.

I definitely think you could improve in some areas.As said in other reviews, the grammar is quite poor but you can't be blamed for this as this site isn't exactly made for English stories, rather translations and for people who are attempting to start grasping the English language, which is difficult, mind you! I do love the idea of the story, I really do, so keep up with that! Character design is a little bland but I feel if that can be improved in later chapters and or by adding in some more descriptions in earlier chapters, say if you were to go back and review them.Overall, 3/5! This isn't bad at all! Really good start, and I'm excited to see where this'll go!Let me know if you'd like me to go through the first 10 chapters, for instance, and give them a pass-over to make the style better fit for English readers! Free of charge, of course!

When both teams saw the residents of the island they remembered the conversation they had before they were brought here,

" Snore...."