can't imagine when life undergoes drastic changes, hopefully they can return to live peacefully as before.doesn't lose sight doesn't mean you can lose happiness, I hope this story has a happy ending
My main complaint is the writing qualityβ¦ sometimes itβs hard to understand whatβs happening in the storyβ¦ the author should find someone to edit his chapters as soon as possibleβ¦ other than that it might be goodβ¦ though the mc seems a little naive for someone with future knowledge.
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Without having any time to react, Lucas felt a sharp sting of pain on back of his neck, like a sharp needle pricking in. The next moment Lucas started to loose his consciousness.
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