Aftermath : Creul Confine

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is there is hareem ,hope not cz i hate it ? is mc cold and ruthless or he forgive his female enemy cz she's pretty or he helps every one that he meets and spend ressources and time just for someone he just met ihope there's non from the above cz im just sick of those novels

Alright! Here’s my honest review on this story:In the first chapter, the spacing of the paragraphs sentences was horrible. But this gets fixed almost immediately in the chapters after that and I suprisingly didn’t see any flaws after that initial first chapter.I can say the characters seem interesting along with believable interactions in most scenes. Some people might believe the characters to be stupid, but they are just teenagers in the story at the moment. So them being stupid is very normal. Especially in the beginning.Currently, when writing this review, there is only 6 chapters released. Because of that, I haven’t seen enough of the story to know if there’s proper pacing or story development.Also, there needs to be more regular updates. At least for the first 20-30 chapters.This is the end of my honest review.

Hobie was wide-eyed, the shock couldn't be expressed due to his current form's figure. But trust me, the shock was there.

"KUSHINA"  Minato yelled

After all, if there is no world to order, they will simply cease to exist while the mages will just have to look for another house.

-Si ese es el caso da lo mejor de ti en los entrenamientos tenemos que limpiar 3 portales este mes y el ultimo será rango D, tenemos poco tiempo para ponernos al día.

  Bis berhenti tidak jauh dari hotel. Kami segera turun karena sudah terlalu gerah. Baru saja turun dari bis, kami diterjang angin dingin musim gugur, yang suhunya lebih dingin jika berada di Jeju. Tentu aku mendadak bersin berkat itu. Aku tahu Sehun tengah menatapku, tapi aku tak berani membalas tatapan itu. Jantungku kini sudah berdebar kacau. Tak ingin ia mengetahui itu, aku segera melangkah mendahuluinya. Oo? Tanganku kembali ditarik olehnya, membuatku berputar dan langsung menghadapnya. Ia membuka jaket tebalnya dan langsung memakaikan ke tubuhku yang hanya berbalutkan 2 lapis sweater. Setelah itu ia melangkah mendahuluiku tanpa mengatakan apapun. Kurasa kini pipiku sudah merona. Aku tak mampu menahan senyuman diwajahku. Omo, senyumanku semakin lebar, bagaimana ini?!