I am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear authorI am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
Dropped at ch6. Main reason - abysmal writing quality (2/5). Bland and ****** language I can stomack, its a light novel, not classical literature, but the way the Author uses punctuations is just... I have no words. I guess, he thinks you put comma wherever you pause in your speech, even if you pause to take breath. Or, more plausible explanation, his keyboard is malfunctioning and the comma key is jammed, firing on its own every now and then."he asked, Joe what was happening" <-- not even the worst, I've seen in one place he put comma after "the
Great I really love it I hope you update soon!!!!I don't want to spoil anything for anyone so... Idk I need more to read like now!!!I love it so far and I'm dying for the next chapter!!!!!
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The two swordsmen quickly scale the mast and cut the knots binding the sails. This causes the ship to begin to sink under the water due to the resin coating, which had been applied by Rayleigh shortly after he had left the Kujas while they were helping Luffy and Itachi finish their disguises. Itachi hadn't been expecting this to happen especially since the main thing you don't want a ship to do is sink. Luffy and everyone seemed ecstatic that it was happening and Rayleigh wasn't concerned either as he was waving from the shore; Chopper seemed to notice Itachi's confusion and got his attention.
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