your synopsis is so real and true, your character design is beautiful, i love your plot already, wonderful story development, keep up the good work, great job!
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So off the bat, the highligt of this story is trully the characters. They have a lot of personality and a very amusing dynamic! They complement each other perfectly.Now the writting quality could use a bit of work, nothing that completely cripples the story as a whole, but enough to stagger at times to understand what exactly is going on.Overall, an excellent story! I hope you keep going and make it even better!
"What if that package could have been helpful if I got in a life threatening situation? Or, another way to think of it, you delaying that package delayed my training. Delaying my training is a risk to my life. So, sure you don't owe me?"
The attention of the students was focused on the teacher. He had a tall figure, was wearing a lavender robe. His eyes were full of wisdom and pride, he was named by the Emperor himself after all. The Order of Maesters, also known as the Maesters of the Citadel. Because of his intelligence and his studies of the Valyrian Freehold, and more importantly, he was granted the title of grand maester by the Emperor, he naturally has the capital to be prideful.
I'm so lucky today. Don't be sad with my comment before. That was saying how i going to hibernation because it's monthly update. Because you see my name is shameless_reader, so i must be shameless. In other case asking 9 to 10chapter to update daily. Because the story really aimπππππππ perfectly 99999999,999999% accurate.
"As you wish Hannah," Rai said in a monotone robot voice. All of our watches pinged with my location. I was close behind Tobias as he ran from me. In a loud crack of lightning and flash of light, Carter had tackled Tobias from the side and pinned him to the ground. Tobias was instantly knocked out.
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