A Trip to Sunny Vale with YOU

You did a really good job here. Great flow and well-organized. Love seeing the main characters groe closer. Keep up the awesome work!

Wait, let us relax a bit. For those of you who just read the first 20 chapters and think you've got the story all figured out, you couldn't be more wrong. The mc doesn't go an as a simp but eventually has people simping all over him from different directions. It's quite an interesting novel showing how he transforms using his martial arts into a confident and very powerful character

Racist trash. Typical can do no wrong MC where even if he's the one to mess up others are punished for it. MC's country is an analogue for China and the story really suffers for it.

First of all, do ignore all the comments while reading.It's funny how people are okay with even worst plot holes  in your standard xianxia but are complaining about it in a Original.He's a 15 year old sheltered kid. And you all bloody expect him to be some sort of strategic genius? He is basically sentenced to death and is somehow managing to etch out his livelihood. What are you even expecting? You expect him to live in forest and like all Xianxia MC earn multiple level ups? He's 15 years old. It's that age when you were not even out of school. He should have stayed in the forest as he was ready to do so as a guardian? He was indoctrinated to believe that they are protectors. He himself claimed that he didn't knew that even demons had hierarchy. He realised that he was unprepared. Above all, earlier he was ready to give his life because of his wish to protect humanity. Why should he do so when he himself has been betrayed? And would he really be able to cultivate properly in a forest? Use some common sense.And everyone asking about his hate for humanity? It might have been exaggeration or something planned for the future. Why are you expecting something that was mentioned in the summary to happen with first few chapters? And then you complain that his hate was too sudden. Now author is trying for a slow build, and you idiots are questioning it every single chapter. The Synopsis is supposed to be for the whole story and not just the prologue as many people here seem to think.If you have problems, tell the author about it, instead of complaining and whining every chapter : What do you think went wrong, what could be corrected, what did you expect.And once again he is a kid, not a superman hunter. He is doing what he could. And yes, his plans for revenge seems half-hearted, but what does he even has to lose? People believe him dead or want him dead, basically a carte blanche to kill him. He can't just go back to the academy, and live there. Of course he will plan for revenge!Anyway, I am barely 20 chapters in but all the mindless idiots were annoying me with half though comments every chapter.And if you all have so many problems, fucking write your own story, instead of complaining of what YOU want. It's his story.If he wants he can make the MC a girl and kill him be dropping the moon on him. You can't do ANYTHING. It's his property. So stop acting like it's his previlage to wrote for you.So signing off And sorry for the rant.Will give a proper review after 100-150 chapters in.And don't mind the idiots. Just write what you want. But do read the comments for ideas or two. Some people honestly want to help you and criticise for a reason. Others just want a reason to complain.

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I love that this book a an original alchemist story line. This should be dropping chapters daily.  Why wasn't this story made available for everyone?

i regret not finding this gem sooner and i look forward for new chapters.                                                                  

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