A Strategist and Queen on the Wrong Paths

"breakfast is ready sweety,"she said happily.

kioz:ok that's a good name bye.

'Herald gets hit hard with these words..'

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It's a bit too early for the novel, but i think this has potential. It's slow start with child mc with 27 year old mind. so expect usual pervert tropes similar to MT. Mc is a child so dont expect any smut from this novel for a long time which also assumes the fact that this novel would go on and not be dropped like hundreds of others wsa entry novels every year.I expect this to be pretty much a pokemon collection type of story because of how his system functions. so fair warning about that.Lore seems like something you would expect from high scale fantasy story but i with how things are progressing, i think most of the story will not have universe shattering stuff rather i expect jojo or jjk style fights.I am not much of a fan of kingdom building trops which is hinted to be one of the key factor of the story due to overlord of humanity ending requirements but hopefully it wont be sht.Also side note, these Lore abilities which mc gets are really whack ti say the least.