Disgusting... I get it that theres student-teacher relationship but the transition is bad... It's forceful, she totally disregard shimazu death by clinging to the feeling growing for hajime... Apparently its more important
I'd recommend that you completely skip the first 12 chapters if you decide to read this sub-par piece of work. Why? Because they are autism in its purest, most concentrated form. The interactions between the characters are so bad and awkward that I actually cringed while reading. The next four chapters are a lot better, mainly because this author has no idea how to talk to people normally, nor does he know how a lot of the laws and regulations about selling unlicensed goods work. Which doesn't show as much when the protagonist has nobody to talk to or interact with(Other than hot and slimy clam girls ofc). Basically, the fist 12 chapters are unreadable, the rest are decent. This is not a book for those who are looking for well developed, interesting characters with fleshed out backstories that interact with and influence the plot. Nor is it for people who look for great world building, or a world that has a lot of interesting history and hidden background like Emperor's Domination. I'd only recommend this to people who are bored and want to read something that doesn't take more than 10 brain-cells to understand. The novel would become a lot more interesting if it takes a darker turn later on, where the protagonist would begin to devour humans for dragon energy, and start a war against humanity with his fish armies.
I am a fan of the author first book. One of the best story that I've read so far and looking forward to this adventure as well.Grammar is smooth, world building is amazing and updates are stable. Author is good with back and the characters are described to give you an image heheReally. There are no complaint. Hope u join us and let's enjoy this book together.
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In the first dozen of chapters we are introduce to the MC's fox friend. After a cool fight, we are once again are put through the torture of reading the MC losing his powers for the fourth time in the story, but now we have to deal with his apparent lack of memories on top of it. This is completely ridiculous for the author to think that this was a good idea to start the second part of his book. And don't forget guys, this fic takes place right after the MC goes to the Fairy World right when he REGAINED his powers for the THIRD TIME.I really don't know if I should even attempt reading this any longer. This author clearly grew to big for his own good and created a disaster of a story so far. As of now the first translator has done a horrible job with the translation. By giving characters names like White Jade and Daoist This and That. It is clearly obvious this work is derived from google translate with little time put into fixing the grammar and sentence structures.Overall I'll wait till a good 200 chapters are translated. So I can skip a head where we have a MC who is back to his previous strength. Right now this fic is a solid 2/5 for everything being subpar. I'll update this with in the next five years.
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