The buckle on Hayati's heel had come undone because it was twisted earlier, so as soon as she thanked him, he bent down to help her buckle her heels properly again. Then, he held out a hand to the girl.
First of all, I must say this is a very well-written novel. The author clearly has a lot of talent when it comes to storytelling. The characters are well-designed, and the story is easy to follow. So far, there are only two chapters, but I am confident the upcoming ones will keep me entertained from beginning to end.The only issue I have is with the spacing between paragraphs, and the second chapter feels way too long. Despite this, I still give this work a solid 9/10.
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