A Lovely Angel is Disguised as a Demon

Love the realistic approach to storytelling and the unique direction it heading!!! Even just looking at mc and mother relationship is awesome.

I really like the story I hope this will continue. 😊🙏🙏🙏🙏The story has a bit of racism at the start but it is not on the main character but on the side. Buymt it is only 3 chapters and the MC has nothing to do with it.Overall it is a good read.

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Not bad but the reduced lifespan thing bums me out… what’s th point in observing a mayfly… im sure it’l be fixed by plot armour so whatever

It relies too much on its humor, which is a problem when it isn't funny. It's the "the MC is stupid," kind of humor, where you're supposed to laugh at the MC. However, when the mc is too dense to suffer the consequences of his own stupidity, it isn't funny. It's pathetic.

5 star for author and story, 1 star for "Cory".... if the other characters have english names i will not be able to handle it.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I love this story. I've already finished it. But the ending is too rush.. It was disappointing. I admit, the whole story (except the ending) is amazing and entertaining... He'll just be unlucky all over again..😥Extremely disappointed at the ending... I wasted my late nights for this..

The writing isn't the best, but I'm enjoying it so far.Not to mention that so far the frequency of releases has been constant and the author himself left in the synopsis that he has more than 200 chapters written, I hope it's true and if it is, we won't have the danger of leaving the story so soon like many others stories out there.I think the only thing I didn't like is about their wishes and as the system is not being explored much, I hope that will change in the future.