A Demon's Child? No, Turns Out I Was Just a Goblin. But I Swear I'll Live a Decent Life!

This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity.And with the worst case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.

Writing quality: Acceptable, but could be better.Story development: really random... Feels like author forgets the story and makes up something new to make the story move along. Forgetting part of the story in the progress. Worst of all, I feel the author messed up the cultivating aspect of the story really badly, be it the speed of cultivating or the system behind it (tend to change from time to time)...Character Design: bad, i don't really see much "development" of the characters and they tend to disapear from time to time when not needed. The main character is stupid... and forgets his upgrade ability whenever it looks like a good idea to use it (example: the tyrant material body technique)...World Background: not anything special, not good, not bad.All in all, it is not a good novel in my eyes, but it has potential and i had a good time reading it. The author, in my eyes, have no need to drag out the chapters like he does -.- waaaaay too much useless information that i really did not care about...

Your writing style was unique! It feels like I am reading a diary! The character's voice was echoing in my head as I read it! An effective and an outstanding work piece of art!

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A familiar voice had once again resounded through his head.

Bermas: Alam mo Kung bakit?! Dahil sayo napahiya ako!! Dahil sayo Parang Wala Ng pag mamahal Ang ama ko sakin!! Dahil sayo nawala Ang atensyon Ng ama ko sakin!! Mabuti pa umalis kana Lang.. Mahina ka at talunan.. Wala Kang kwenta!!!

"A skill to make Illusion Barriers [ ID Create ], has been created."

Especially since as soon as he was aware of this, he instantly felt cold.