80s Military Marriage: A Sweet Romance with a Military Officer Husband and the Joy of Having Babies

I loved this book!! It was a great storyline and the characters were well thought out. I couldn’t put it down. Easy to follow and descriptive! I’m excited to get into book 2: Konstantin ...

Latest chapter read (153) So far this is a complex novel with an equally complex MC. So if you like a simple MC and a straight forward plot this is not the novel for you.Although there is usually 1 or 2 grammar mistakes per chapter the novel itself is easy to read and understand.As for story development even though the author repeatedly stresses that the story is progressing slowly. From a reader's viewpoint the story is instead progressing very rapidly with different event occuring usually without sufficient build up.And due to the quick pacing several plot holes and inconsistencies occur. In terms of character design I feel as though the author has done a very good job in making a complex and mildly intelligent character with several personality issues.Skipping over update stability I feel as though the most glaring issue in the novel is it's World Background/ World development.This issue is mainly due to two reasons the stories pacing and the addition of other world too early in the story.First of all since the novel is only 153 chapters long at this point the 2nd issue I feel can easily be fixed as the story progress. However, the first issue namely the quick story pacing causes all three worlds to feel more like a PowerPoint slide than an actual world. Now by pacing (to make it clear) I am not criticizing the stories plot. I personally believe the plot is alright. What I am criticizing is how quickly the MC goes from one plot point to another with out sufficient build up to said event. The best example of this is how the MC went to fight the blood gang although the plot was sound, the lack of background of where the MC is, the history of the area ,why the blood gang was even in the area, and how the MC even knows the existence of the tribal area cause the entire scene to be a bit chaotic and confusing. Hopefully as the story continues the author is able to fix most of the issues of the story.

this novel was one of the winners of Spirity , so it had great potentials, but alas it got a rushed ending , everything was rushed ,from relationships ,romance, powere ,etc ...even the writing quality was rushed at the end 😅 , full of misspelling and wrong names.and at the end of the day all MC's powers were borrowed from others, as if he wasn't the MC of this story ...but at least it got a happy ending

Ok so I usually don't bother writing a review, but this one just annoyed me in the wrong way..First - synopsis only reflect the very first chapter, as from the second chapter it feels like it's a different book what so ever..Second - let's say we ignore synopsis and first chapter as a mistake, but even then the MC after transmigration can only think about having s**.. Third - following from second point there's no story development, there's a random time skip with unexplained cultivation increase (cultivation levels are a mystery) and forced events without any logic involved.I'm normally quite tolerant with the novels even if they're not my cup of tea, but even if it's the very first novel that the author wrote there's just too many inconsistencies. WebNovel SHOULDN'T allow the novels of such bad quality to reach trial reads..

I really like the book my man, keep up the good work

This novel really took me by surprise and I want more people to try it, if you read the first 10 chapters and still aren't interested on this novel, then maybe it's not for you. This story is takes a very unique approach to the concepts of wizards and I sincerely hope it gets more recognition

Great novel it has you by the edge of my seat.  I wait for all the new chapters  it has a great plot. Ever week I check for a new chapter. Great novel

I was a bit confused at first, but the story line draws you in. Adam seems to be making the best of his situation. Period and comma placement could use some work, but all in all; Great Story! Keep up the good work Author!