[BL] Debut in Interstellar After Retiring as Grim Reaper

"He is right, maybe we need some rest" Boyun  replied him. They all seemed to buy the idea, so they all sat on the floor under a tree. Everywhere was tranquil and seemed peaceful around the place. No one talked, they all were just starring at each other.

"Tsk, Im just don't like common ones I want something unique like, Sis's T-rex." Kreals retorted back at his father then continued in a low tone "You just don't let me try taming a mutated one" Still Jack heard him but only smiles.

I fell like this was a gag story.

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Hmm ... I see the number 2. 2 months, right? "Asked Mr. Rioy.

First time writing, so I hope to improve more with the upcoming chapters though I promise you that this novel may not be perfect but it will be engaging. As the chapters progress it will just get better and better. So I hope you all will give me support in this journey through reviews, comments, collection and what not. For now have a great day everyone

This review follows Webnovel's provided rating criteria, and each category will be given a short explanation.Firstly, writing quality is three stars. In the initial chapters, there are glaring spacing errors that took me right out of my reading flow. This issue seems to be largely gone by chapter 6, but I'd recommend polishing those initial chapters. Remember, first impressions matter!Next, story development is five stars. The pacing is great, and it makes me want to read more.Character design is. . . One star. The characters have names, but I can't recall any basic features aside from clothes.Lastly, world background is five stars. It's  a unique setting that I'd say is extremely memorable.

Hello, everyone! I'm the author of this story and after seeing how other authors wrote their own reviews and used it as information board or place where you all can share your thoughts in case you don't want to write a review.***General Information***- I won't drop the series mid-way!- I will regularly update the story, so you will always have chapter(s) to read per week.- The story is quite a slow-paced one.- Curious of the tags? Let me give you some that I can think of: Fantasy, Slice of Life, Comedy, Drama, Psychological, Reincarnation, Female Protagonist, Age Progression, Sword and Magic.- I also publish this story in other platforms, all under the same pen name, but expect the numbering and parting to be quite different from the other platforms, as in this webnovel platform, I set the maximum chapter length to be around 2000 words, with 1000+ words as the average chapter length here.- I love Japanese novels, so expect that this story will get influences from them, i.e. the style of the writing.======================================***Story Overview***If you want to know what to look forward to and don't mind to get some possible spoilers, continue to read these points, but if you want your life to be full of surprises, jump to continue reading my thoughts and comments after the "=====" line.- This story will start out as Slice of Life that focuses on the MC's new life, how she can come to terms with her forced reincarnation, and try to learn about her new life as she tries to break free from the chains of her past life. I want to give the feeling of growing up together with the MC to the readers. The conflicts she faced early on might be small, but it would gradually turn into bigger issues. As of now, the issues she faced might be quite trivial (like how she had to face her past self's acquaintances and family members; and tried to hide the fact that she's reincarnated).- Will this remain a relaxed Slice of Life (SoL)? The answer is no. I have conflicts and actions ready in the future for our MC, but I want to let her grow up in character before throwing her off to face the bigger issues planned for her. However, I won't abandon the SoL aspect, as there will be SoL chapters even amidst the conflicts. - Lastly or TL:DR, I want you all to really feel and experience the life of our MC here, and not just read through all the conflicts and how she might be able to handle all of them, or just shoving off some actions to wow you. It might be the contributing factor to the slow pacing this story has. Hopefully, you will be able to experience the life that the MC has in this story and feel more connected to the world of this story! ======================================***My Thoughts and Comments***- Thank you for reading my story. I would be really glad if you are enjoying the story I'm writing. I hope I can continue to make this story better and that it won't disappoint you in the end ^^- Don't hesitate if you want to drop some comments or point out if I made typos, I would really appreciate that!- I really appreciate all the supports you give towards this story (comments, votes/powerstones, etc). They will all be my motivation to keep this story going and to make the story better.I think that's all, and in case this review can't be edited and I would like to add anything, I will write it in this review's reply. I hope this review can get my thoughts crossed out to you guys about the story I'm writing. Oh, also... I'm giving five stars to my own story for a personal goal to make this story as good as possible! And my last word would be : thank you very much!

A truly amazing novel! The writing style is engaging and smooth, and the events are full of excitement and suspense. The characters are deep and draw you into the story’s world effortlessly. It’s hard to stop reading, and I’m eagerly looking forward to what happens next