[BL] Debut in Interstellar After Retiring as Grim Reaper

looks intriguing

10% About Pets.30% about How good the MC is and why people should worship him. 30% about politics / trade. 30% Repeating information or speaking useless information.

752 reviews, seems legit right?I hate how you can’t trust reviews and have to read the novel.How could this happen to me, I’ve made my mistakes, I’ve got somewhere to run.Cya o7

There are some suggestions tho, which I hope you take as a constructive criticism for your own improvement.You don't really need to be adamant in explaining the system but at least include some subtle hints or few information regarding it.The MC is great for developing so keep at it. I just hope you don't take his ruthlessness in later chapters. A cold dagger slices the hand that touches it. Don't go overboard in being conceited tho, a shadow may bask in the light but they stay firm relative in their position.The harem, i approve your building up too. Keep it not as rush, it relish the flavor. Character introduction should be firm and their encounter somewhat distinct than the others. In this your doing a good job. Nice building up Natalie, I like hardworking characters that although seen with shade of frost but within them a summer breeze.The world building could use some work. It is alright tho so I say slightly above average. Make people be absorbed in the explanation. Such as make some detailed overview to work the reader's imagination. The greatest working hand of the author is his reader's imagination so do experiment your own style in captivating that aspect. Of course you can't cater everyone so don't compromise the story for just about everyone.This is not because I don't like the story. It is good and interesting but I'll be frank that I'm not much sold. This is the highest I could give for now. I hope your growth would be outstanding.Current chapter: 128I'll be taking my leave then.

I have read up to volume two so what I review about will just be regarding those chapters. The story kept me engaged and reading into the night . the story progresses at a reasonable rate and still has room for more development.

Although this is an incomplete novel as of yet, I quite like it. It's unique to its genre and just overall is a good stoty. Also, love the consistant uploads author-san! I hope this novel becomes a sucess. Appreciate your work <3

Good in-depth character and well-written background! a rare sight because most new novels have problems with that. all the best author san! please don't drop this.

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