[Adventure King]

I love this Novel

I'M HERE well done to another great book

Not bad, not good but just blandThe gorilla gimmick is not utilized and instead we get a human in a gorilla's bodyThink of planet of the apes then remove whatever was good about it and you get this novelThe author can't decide between human or gorilla and the mc becomes another imitation of a monster protagonistThere is no direction to the story (plot is nonexistent) and the filler chapters ruin immersionWorst of all the entire premise becomes wasted due to indecisive writingP.S - If you have read any novel like this one then you have read 99% of the monster protagonist novels (or at least they pretend to be monsters)

I thought the novel would be interesting but after I started reading it with the mc eating creatures and have a gene increase notification just reminded me of super gene which I believe is a lot better than this

Oh. It's a sports novel.never mind.nobody ever remembers this type.After a day or two, they can't even recall the name.Which pretty much puts Sports at the bottom of the reading list.

This is sad....Sad that such a good story has yet to be recognized, honestly this is well written the character development is well, its emotional with drama. The character development is well balanced..slow and yet not too slow. Plus, the [possible ] love interest is not some slutty or unrealistic character [love at first sight...****].  ALso The MC is quiet interesting.Suggestion: -There is too much secrets..kinda annoying..[ex: the secret family of the MC, the characters past] try to reveal them.-I personally ship MC and fait together..make it sweet and fluff, add some romance..[just dont make fait some korean style female lead that was used by her previous lover and then abandoned..in fact no previous lovers at all...! I'm begging no korean style tragic angst ****..keep this happy]. The beautiful maiden...Lady fate came and saved her beloved mortal..-Get it?-Bash..yep I want some bash..bash MC's  past fiance/family...[I mean they werent there when he was broken] and no redemption..just straight up bash and they regret it.-Dont make Nev and her brothers past angsty..just sad.-This might sound weird but in the later chps make MC start a family with love interest..maybe 3 kids.. Anyway I said my piece...love your stuff,,i do hope more people read this...also dont make this angsty/tragic/korean style [NO offense to koreans but most of their romance is rape/betrayal/separation...cheating and then back together..total ****]..try to keep this happy and fluff and romantic..we all need some romance in our lives.Good luck and Good show.

story is interesting and plot is also nice 👍👍👍

I have read it until chapter 25 or 24 and the novel is really good. Characters pretty likeable we don't see a lot charecters but the people we saw until now is fun to read, a lot of action from the very start like a lot and different concept or plot that I didn't saw in any other novel's at least not yet. There are two minor problems which probably could be fixed and even if it does not fix novel is good enough that you probably wouldn't care. The first one when Mc is thinking his thought's writing "like this" but also conversations writing "like that" if his thoughts writing 'like this' might had been better but it is not a big deal as the story itself is really good. Second minor problem is. There is really a lot action from very start. Without knowing anything about the things happening around Mc decides, helps and finishs things that might be needed more thought's and time. There might be argument about if he had time but even then it might had been better if he was more careful about things when deciding what to do about all of the things happening around but it can ve overlooked as again I at least seeing myself that the novel is good enough so it is making me forgive or forgot those two minor problems which if fine at least by me. Thank you for the time spent on the novel author and take care.