4.5yrs Adorable Baby Bundle Spoiled by 7 Handsome Brothers

Honestly, this is rather bad. The author just lists events one after another without creating any immersion, the dialogue is the equivalent of two ai conversing as the characters feel more like NPCs, the world-building is ridiculous with stuff like mc gaining the eternal mangekyou sharingan within the first 5 chapters, despite it being unknown to everyone in this world, we don`t know the era or even what the mc is trying to accomplish, and the grammar is not far from MTL in terms of quality, which is quite the achievement. The story has potential, but the author should seriously plan out what they want to write and edit their work.

Thanks thanks...                                                        It's a nice story                                                      👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Worth Reading! plot development is good and concise, all the character may not have a detailed background but can be considered stable and pivotal. Interesting point is how the world structure takes place specially how the author's use of diverse Historical Places not just the ones in MC home country

"You wouldn't know! Maybe the church had many hidden powerful people. If I was so great, how could they abandoned me easily? Meaning... I was not great enough to be their important pillar." I concluded.

1 years later...

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Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

"Nice first move but its my turn now, cubone sandstorm" praise Derek