Harry's second visit to Diagon Alley was a lot smoother than the previous time due to the fact that Petunia was not as perturbed as she had been the first time around. In fact, Harry felt that she was slightly enjoying herself this time around.
There are some slight misspellings, and I saw a few times that the words used didn't really fit the narrative. However, overall, it is a pretty good story.
Translation quality is good, you update frequently which should be more reason why I must keep reading. Then, going to the story development, this is something that actually wowed me. I mean, you put the characters in order, and your world background was well thought out. Keep it up author!
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