Murim Salon

should be in the section called shit was cancelled

Dont end this

she do be kinda ugly tho

I feel a weird dullness with this breakup, like this should probably feel more dramatic that it is. Don't read every chapter anymore so was that out of left field or was there some sign I missed?

Dont ever smoke kids

22 comments, I need latex

Pikasha > chocobo

Here's the biggest issue: It's blatantly a power fantasy in the laziest way possible.

Down already? Power up on it's way. No reason at all, it just happens in the best moment possible.
Not strong enough? Bullshot power up on it's way.
Feelings betrayed? There's no build, the NTRman just has some charm skill so technically they didn't betray you they are just being manipulated.
Feeling lonely? Slave friend on it's way. Hey, let's make her a cute little girl so it's not such gloom or depressing moment.
Feeling horny? Slave is now a grown up woman over night with a porn star body she's also actively open and horny for you.
Zero merits? No problem big guy, here's a legendary sword, a legendary challenge only you can complete (And with ease don't sweat it), a legendary achievement, etc.