Yeah I don't think it's likely either. I said as much in my original comment (which I naively didn't expect to be controversial lmao). I just think that would have been a more interesting and satisfying way for the story to go.
what fucking kind of story does this want to be. Why the fuck does any of this exist? God I somehow agree with the guy below me. This is literally just depression porn made specifically to get off on depression.
There literally isnt any meaning in any of this. No rhyme or reason. Characters are one-dimensional cutouts of humans. They simply move to make things depressing. The author wants to feel things, yet he doesnt even understand a lick of emotions.
You create a fucking story to tell a STORY. Not to shove emotions on yourself. This isnt a story; its only purpose is to make the author feel something. He hooks you with a semi-decent premise, then just yeets it all into a bin so he can cry.
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There literally isnt any meaning in any of this. No rhyme or reason. Characters are one-dimensional cutouts of humans. They simply move to make things depressing. The author wants to feel things, yet he doesnt even understand a lick of emotions.
You create a fucking story to tell a STORY. Not to shove emotions on yourself. This isnt a story; its only purpose is to make the author feel something. He hooks you with a semi-decent premise, then just yeets it all into a bin so he can cry.
It's genuinely pretty insulting to the reader.
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