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Exiled Rebels Scanlations: It is the masculine longing that swirls within humanity, a feeling foreign to Sora. Fleeing from home, he sought refuge in the human world. Misunderstood during an interview, he was taken in by the proprietor, Eril. Brought to the shop, doubts began to creep into Sora's mind—was his purpose here merely to have his organs harvested?
i love this
I'm not hugely smitten with the characters, and the humour isn't really to my taste. Most of the gags are built around the premise that Sora is just reaaally dumb and always being put in undesirable situations against his knowledge, which isn't all that funny to me unfortunately. The story is not terrible but also nothing too profound or impressive either; it mostly consists of silly misunderstandings and bickering with a dash of angst thrown in to "edge it up" a little. Can't say I was a big fan of this one.
I want more!!!!!!!!
It's a silly, cute love story, with very beautiful art. I did like it. Characters are likeable. There's some depth, enough to make the story interesting. The idea of making an angel the brothel's owner is awesome. The thing with angels and devils visiting humans' world is nice as well. Certainly there are good things about this story. On the other hand there's a cliche debt motive and also the motive of being lost, without money and a place to go. If only the mangaka played that out better... and the ending was too open. Well, it is what it is - a silly, simple story with pretty art, rather cute characters and some smut. It's good for a quick read, just don't expect too much.
Why did you use so many cliche sensei? stop with cliche, add more background for characters (why you didn't show Sora's parents? Eri's parents? they deserve at least full one page; without them the "home" thing was half-assed) and think of better final scene, with more sex and some explanation what they decided to do in the future. If you won't, your works will never surpass a "nice time killer" category.