Iriya no Sora, Ufo no Natsu

Pikachu used volt tackle!

why not just run across the lake as soon as you feel danger lol

Good read. I really like this one.

Holy shit such good art

Who let Kohei cook?

"Pimpu ni narou!"

I'd like this a lot more if the chapters where all cut up.
I missed the fight he had with oden what's her face, and the chapters after that, where all over the place.
Why is this set up like this. If your gonna steal or post chapters, then do it well. Or not at all.
None of the "number point number" shit.
Rant over, sorry about that.

What the hell is going on in this description

Helps that she is a specialist, she can go off the beaten path with more ease.

But I think she had some sort of formal training, at least she has found some form of text about the basics, she uses too much of the standard words to not have any sort of instruction.

I think it's because the offshoot doesn't have the life experience that Jill did?

Damn, I'm 2 years late but that's it? That's the end?

What a fucking disaster.
This type of story by itself is fine but as an author leading your audience on into believing that your story is about the wholesome relationship between two people who seem to have a mutual interest in each other, then throwing a curveball like this cucking the shit out of her making it so that this mc never told her about his girlfriend somehow, and even worse yet yami didnt tell the fmc about them FUCKING as soon as she saw that this girl was crushing on him.
Yami wasnt wrong to interact with the guy but at the same time she is fully in the wrong for not coming out right away as soon as her friend said she was interested in her, and the male mc is also a piece of shit for not coming out saying hes into someone when this girls puttin the moves on him.