Accelerando

This ties the plot together really nicely. It actually didn't make a lot of sense for so many people to have betrayed him, especially the princess and even Christina. Aphrodite did similar shit to people, like Medusa whose only "crime" was other people saying she was the most beautiful woman.

The art is good, I mean really good, this author really was Hori's assistant their art is BHA levels of good.

The concept too is interesting, used already but good, but the storytelling just isn't clicking. The author is using too many writing "crutches", the dialogue is cliche and the pacing isn't good.

However, even if i say the dialogue is cliche, i can see too that the author tries to not make them like that, the character do have wit to them and so they are "efficient" in their actions, but it isn't quite there yet.

But the pacing really needs working, i can't put the finger on what exactly is wrong but if the author doesn't do something this will get axed

ngl he hasnt been very solo lately

:(

Cheers

wow this guy is my fav red sentai ever, absolutely amazing

The topic is explored since Yoshiki loved og Hikaru. But not a lot of thing will happen since og Hikaru is dead and actual Hikaru is not really able to have human feelings.

Nah... Too much hair and handsome, nothing alike

The art is iffy sometimes but I got verrry good progress
Good job

Threesome, threesome, threesome!!

How come this isn't a hentai