After Failing to Find Immortality Chapter 56 Discussion

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While I do think this story is interesting, there is a big problem that, once noticed, does not go away. I am talking about the use of ellipses. Much of the story uses ellipses to emphasize pauses or deep thoughts. I am not exaggerating when I say that every two or three sentences will contain an ellipsis.

Lin Tianlu is a trans-migrator who suddenly became the sole owner of a defunct immortal sect mountain. Full of peak immortal energy, he defeats evil spirits and gets girls falling in love with him. I do not expect any character development from the female cast such as Hua Shuya, Cheng Yishi, or Mao Ruoyu.

This is an easy going power fantasy that will pass the time.
 
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