- #1
World-building is a mess (-1).MC's power buildup doesn't have much context or reasons (-1).A royal princess is allowed to leave alone with a s*ave and faces no risk what-so-ever. Really?! (-1).Lost control of self after taking medicine but still somehow works to keep the being hailed as strongest in check? I really don't get it. In the first place why would the strongest being lose on a contest of soul with a guy who is suppose to give up on living? (-1).From how the story is progressing, I can't feel any life and soul of the characters. They feel more like dolls doing what the author feels like doing. (-1).I'll give (+1) for Yulia. But I don't feel it'll go well. I mean MC's gonna save the world again for her (forced by the author), that deserves another (-1). But I have to stick with 1 star at least.
