I Became a War Hero Executed Due to False Accusations Chapter 30 Discussion

  • #1
Pretty bad.

at the start it seems to keep to the premise "betrayed hero +revenge".

The betrayers immediately get told by god that they f*cked up and the world will end because of them, yet in the next chapter they seem to have completely forgotten about it.

Worse, the "hero" reincarnates in a situation where he has to defeat the new evil because of "survival". So, the betrayal ultimately had no negative effects on the world and the hero will still save everyone.

The author seems to have no real direction for his plot, as the entire settings around the MC change every 7 chapters or so.

As for cliches... is basically naruto+jjk, evil dude sealed inside the MC.
 
  • #2
This was a great book, until someone messed with it and removed chapters and repeated chapters. They are so out of order! I’m pissed! I paid for the book and would like to reread it but can’t because it’s all f***ed up and out of order.
 
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