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This is good, the storyline is also good.MC is quite smart but not cunning, he had abilities to discern benefit and loss from decision based on logical approach. And like I said he isn't too cunning so there is a little scheme here and there but he mostly move based on benefit.One flaw tho, I hope every character had more depth to their backround.Spoiler
I know they erased the existence of the chaos people from the world, but at least give more than just describing the character through action, like giving backround story or motive on how did the character behave that way.
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