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Quite a few reviews already but I wanted to add my input.Edit chapter 148: it has developed nicely, but quite alot of time skips. Dropoing the rating to 3/5 but it is still decent novelI gave it 4/5 for it's entertainment value. Where I'm now on the story, it has reasonably well started world building, interesting premise amd believable MC. I am starting to look forward to side character interaction since monolgue thoughts can only go so far for me. If the side characters that will be introduced are well written I might give 5/5. Although part of it might be just because I have been waiting for new kingdom building fantasy that has ongoin translations :D realistically 4/5 seems to be the best this can do, but it can still drop lower like so many others when author starts taking shortcuts.