My Fiance, The Prince, Was Having An Affair, So I Decided To Seduce The Girl He Was Cheating On Me With Chapter -- Discussion

Before anything else, I really need to bring up the issue of their names. Like... Seriously, what sort of names are those? It was difficult trying to take the novel seriously. Hopefully, it was a mistranslation.

Now, onto the story. While this is a short story, I feel like this could be so much better. For example, how did the females (heroine and villainess) get so close so fast? It just feels a little too plastic for my feeling. Like the other comment, I was looking for a manipulative FL but all there was a love-sick FL. But then, it is a one-shot so I really shouldn't have had high expectations...