I Raised Snow White! Chapter 130 Discussion

  • Thread starter DaoisthiEB5M
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I figured I would read thru the mtl version (130 chapters as of story) to see more of the story past what's posted.

The story is ok somewhat as an MC tries to be a loving mother to not fall into the fatal ending of the story, but as the story progresses, MC finds that the story is not always following the same as the story from the game or previous life, but Author tends to make bad plot points at times in the story that were only added to create conflicts, but there reasons should have been easy for MC to do it a different way, but author made them take the worst way that makes them seem s*upid.

Tags Gender Bender: Spoiler

This story seems more like MC was already a women in real live, because MC goes from man to women with Zero issues & no real story points of adjusting to being a women suddenly.

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Yuri: Spoiler

Somewhat Yuri stuff not till about 65 chapter, but it's more of a drunk attempt by noble wives on the drunk queen (MC) but it goes no where. As for MC Yuri"?", she is acting like a women with no connections to men or women in intimacy. MC does not have lover feelings for the adoptive princess (thou she has a couple weird dreams of the future being chained & the princess forcing kisses), most of MC contact with the princess is more like a overly loving mother caring for her daughter (trying to stay on her good side so she is not killed by the princess). Only a misunderstanding by the 10 year old snow white later that caused the princess to have unusual feelings she does not understand at that age, since one of the noble wife's daughter shared an adult romance book with the princess & she doesn't understand some of the words & confuses the drunk MC being a playful step-mother with an accidental kiss on the lips. Later it is still the adoptive daughter who is the one with feelings for the MC, but other then her stealing a kiss from a sleeping mother & few other kisses she asks for that MC took as being a loving mother spoiling her cute daughter, nothing really happens.

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The interaction with what I'm guessing is the main villainess....Spoiler

A time traveling snow white from different time lines who died 30+ times but currently in this attempt to protect the princess without knowing that a transmigrated MC is in the body of the one she hates & is seeking revenge on, but she doesn't understand why her counterpart (princess) is not in the same bad situation as she was originally in & why the MC is not as evil as before

[collapse].... of the story is at times kind of weird. Author does one part of the story & after it flashes back to bring up what lead to the interaction.

Near the last current chapter we see issues with one of the s*upid plot points added earlier.Spoiler

I mean why does the MC have to leave the capitol? Sure she made a deal to stay longer in the castle after the kings death to raise the princess and have to give up being the Queen & leave the castle once the princess came back from the academy because the nobles thinks she is a witch & they do not want to support her as a queen, but there was no real reason to leave the area & still be near her adoptive daughter & still have interactions. Once the Princess became the queen, she would have the right to bring the mother back into the castle.

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  • #2
I liked reading this story but when it will ended..I been reading this for only few pages a day.
 
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