Lost Lovers Chapter Completed Discussion

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I decided to read it even though the rating was low because the genre is Apocalypse. But the closer it gets to the end, the more chaotic the plot becomes.

The MC's personality doesn't change at all from beginning to end, childish and immature. The author tries to explain that the MC grows, but I don't think so at all. Near the end of the text, many decisions are made by the MC that are very bad, if this were another novel, he would have been a side character who was thrown away at the beginning of the story.

The MC relies on his father all the time and doesn't really develop. The author tried to make the MC seem mature and not dependent on his father but it was too contrived, too fake and careless.

And ML, the father, his personality is a bit strange. The author tries hard to show that he is a good and firm leader, but there are too many things that say otherwise.

The plot is not well structured, maybe the author just wrote based on the existing inspiration, without having a clear benchmark. There are many plotholes and the logic is a bit chaotic.

I know this is a fantasy novel but fantasy worlds also have their own logic. OMG, reading this made me have a hard time
 
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