Players Think I’m a Demon God Chapter -- Discussion

  • Thread starter just.breathe
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  • #1
After the first section of the story the MC is more of a side character, he observes everybody else and act as the audiences pov for what's going on but his existence is the literal deus ex machina of the story, he's the God that comes in last minute when everyone else has done their best and all hope seems lost to fix the situation. It's an amusing way to tell the story at least for the first city's story. The chat rooms are arguably the best part of the story. The biggest problem I found was the lack of romance because there was potential there that just wasn't tapped into.
 
  • #2
Why does he want Alice as a Broken toy. Does he just using his power to get what he wants. Did Madison know what was going to happen to Alice at auction? Does he even love Madison? Poor Alice she deserves happiness. can't wait for more chapters
 
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