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Pros:Innteresting characters.The writing does get better after the early chapters.Though it's a "MC doesn't want to interfere with the game's plot" type of plot you see in Self Insert fanfics, the plot deviations here actually are interesting and the butterfly effect portrayed very subtly.Cons:There's too much monologuing. Too many words to say the same thing. Every character has a title, like Benevolent Princess Penia, and it kept being repeated so many times that it got annoying.The cliche of "I don't want to interfere with the plot" even though the plot has already been unwittingly derailed can get annoying.The MC's bad reputation also looks overblown given that what he did wasn't exactly that horrible.