Kuro no Maou Chapter 458 Discussion

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It's just disappointing, I don't want to use extreme words that would put people off. This story showed great promise at the beginning and it just keeps going downhill

The MC is clueless and downright ret*rded sometimes. Before he got sent to the other world he seemed somewhat intelligent but it's like he's just getting dumber and dumber now

The story is just too slow and wordy. Too much time is spent describing things that aren't relevant, even while a large scale battle or a simple fight is going on you see very little action compared to the amount of words used. It's just an endless description that drowns out the fight and makes it boring.
 
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