- #1
The story is good but the writing is unbearable, the author suffer from 2 things1- the over explaining, seriously he over detail anything you would see 5 lines explaining how someone is failing down after trying to kick someone, thats really tiring honestly.2- changing POV and going back in time for their POV like wtf we’re in the middle of something here and you just casually go back in time and show us someone else POV.honestly if it wasnt for these 2 problems I would’ve gave this novel a 4