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The MC is so strong, even at level 1, that the story gets very boring very quickly.The author tries to cover this up with commentary, but it's like watching a body builder lifting a pebble while saying "oh, this is so heavy..."Edit: one other issue, conveniently s*upid villains. People see the MC doing impossible things (cheat magic at it's finest) but you're not wary of him at all?