- #1
The translation was done well (+1 ⭑), but the story is not that great. Compared to all the other QT (quick transmigration) stories I've read this is just... not great.Our MC does not give me an impression to like or remember her by. It's supposed to have comedy but I just don't find it funny. The main mission of the MC is to win the ML back btu all she has to do is stick to the ML and by time, she's already done with the task.The building of feelings is wayyyy too rushed, and the story has no logic at all which makes it unrealistic.Spoiler
Arc 1: If the ML really did love the OC (original character) why did he not do anything when he knew that she lost their child. If the ML did pay attention to the OC he should have clearly known how important the child in her stomach was.
Imagine if the person you love so much were pregnant and was happily waiting for the birth of their child, you would be happy for them (maybe not if you're possessive). But then she loses the child she loves and to another one of your woman which made her reclusive, would you not be angry??
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