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I am livid after getting severely blue-balled by the author.I started reading this novel with the expectation that it deserves it's rating of 3.9 (I'd give it 3.3), and whilst I can agree that the beginning of the novel deserves the rating, the author's shortcomings can clearly be seen past ~ 80 chapters. I will not include spoilers in this review.Like other reviewers have mentioned, the character is edgy which is acceptable because character development exists. I don't understand the purpose of this but about 60-70% of the story is MC dribble about how he hates himself and there's no development.Secondly, the author utilizes plot hooks without providing any resolution to them. There is a bare minimum of conflict resolution within the novel and readers are edged to the point of being blue-balled every chapter.The last issue I have is the novel comment board feature which is horribly implemented, as the author attempts to predict our opinions on the development and always attempts to "outdo" the examples. A predictable outcome is not always an unsatisfying outcome, the author will always develop some contrived sequence of events to prevent predictable outcomes from happening then you're given some lousy excuse by the author. It's subpar writing at best, you can find significantly better reads elsewhere.