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I like the concept of the story and how she's currently a 7 year old (formerly 20 before transmigrating). For me, its more gratifying like that when everything unfolds in the future. She's a very hardworking person and also smart, so watching her grow up is gonna be very interesting because of that. Buttttt, the narration is whats disappointing for me. Its kinda vague? And doesn't really go into much details, which is a bummer. Its in third person and per chapter there's a very few dialogues. I don't know what's in her environment at all, what does her school look like, her classmates, her teachers. Its hard to imagine at all because its all vague.
What threw me off the most is the time skip, like what hell was that? At chapter 9, we're just at her second day of school but in chapter 10 there's already a 7 years time skip?? Like, we wouldn't even see her hardships in her first months at school? Especially since her major is not what she initially wanted. How did she overcome it? How did she survive? We're just gonna narrate everything that happened in those 7 years?? Just telling and not showing at all?
Just why?
I know I'm probably judging too early but if its like that til the end, I can't finish it.
I could really see the potential but the writing is just kinda lazy writing imo.[collapse]