- #1
Not gonna lie, this story is kinda boring. The idea is refreshing at first but the repetitive plot of conflict, argument, and solution are ruining it.The author have a talent to transform a 2 second brain monologue into a 2 chapter full of unecessary description of feelings and despair when in reality it's just 2 second like- that's the moment I know that there's no redemption on this one..And the balant description of ML handsomeness of blah blah blah is really turning me off. I really could careless if he was eating soup using his slender white attractive left wrist 🙃Also, can the author try not to make the villainess as cliche as possible? Like, yeah I get it, Sheng Man is vapid, arrogant, s*upid fake daughter, but to copy her character and paste it to every side female characters... Ugh... And don't get me start on the villain or supposed 'ML of original novel', can he even be called ori-ML? The use of 'bad guys' character just to highlight the MC & ML beauty, wealth, talent, etc is boring. There's no point of MC & ML defeating the 'bad guys' cause they were already ruining themselves. There's no stimulating directory between MC/ML and those villains interactions. There's no character growth either in both ML & MC. No skill growth or whatsoever even after nearly half of the novel. Kinda get the feeling that this novel is just a mash up of several popular entertainment novel with some tweaks and additions.Might just drop this cause I could be reading sth more interesting than reading one more description about the ML deep dark black attractive eyes 🙂 (ngl I'm kinda harsh in this review but I was just so disappointed, even with the cliche plot, if author refine each characters of the novel, the plot and trajectory could be much much better)
