I Help the Richest Man Spend Money to Prevent Disasters Chapter 422 Discussion

It's an extremely boring novel. Translation is ok.

But the author doesn't know how to write a good story. More than half of the novel is redundant because of flowery words and an attempt to sound poetic (it wasn't even written well). In one chapter at most 2 paragraphs give some information, rest all are just flowery words revolving around those two paragraphs; it looked like author read some mediocre books and decided to copy paste but was stuck at less than average level. The romance is very flat. I've read other slow romances but this one portrayed to be deep love while it was not.

Also what's with the adjective of smiling at the corner of lips, arching the ends of eyebrows or eyes, all mediocre novels I've read use these kinds of sentences.

Similarly what's with cnovels and their penchant to make people speak slowly and move slowly and sometimes they even smile slowly. It's like if they move at normal speed everything will combust; even when scenes are about something urgent they still move slowly as snail. There are instances where it's required but these novels use it every f*cking sentence. They also think that being strong means having calm indifferent expressions all throughtout no matter who you're talking to or what you're talking about. It kind of takes away from the emotion of the moment. The protagonists never smile fully, they always smile slightly, there's always only subtle smiles and slight bend of lips. Am I missing something here. Why can't they laugh and smile normally.

Coming back to this novel many things did not make sense if you thought even a little bit deeper. The reactions were sometimes off (don't know if it's translations error or just written wrongly), the way people reacted was not natural and most scenes of netizens speaking was only possible due to author and not something even close to reality.

Anyway if this was a short story I would've liked it because I would be spared off paragraphs upon paragraphs of useless flattery and descriptions of one scene.

I do wanna mention I only wanted to read something to fill time so I wasn't looking for some great writing or story. I was deliberately looking for some mediocre fluffy novels and this even failed at that.