LordDragonMonarch February 19,2025 #1 The writing style goes by tell rather than show.The progression is sloppy with no build up and things just happen.I can't enjoy the faceslapping since the author doesn't let the readers actually let readers connect to the characters. Reply
The writing style goes by tell rather than show.The progression is sloppy with no build up and things just happen.I can't enjoy the faceslapping since the author doesn't let the readers actually let readers connect to the characters.