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Most of the story drew me in so hard, I didn't stop for 3 days till I read to C273. There are big problems but I feel the author put those in specifically to point out how distorted the MC is. Major elements of the plot are twisted. Major elements of the characters are twisted. Good and bad elements are both tangible yet contextual.Much like the other reviewers, I want those characters dead.Spoiler
MC works his ass off for people who he wants to help, but often are ungrateful, lazy, entitled, whiners. This seems sweet but its demented because he doesn't even realize how desperate he is for acceptance and approval. The main princess b*tch-face, scowler of scowlers, down-nose looker of down-lookers, deserver of razor enemas, is somehow... a good girl now?
[collapse]I'd give it 5 stars if not for that specific part. I kinda understand the author. I think they're emphasizing the MC's distorted, usually loveable, but screwed up trait.Its a great read, just expect frustration.