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While this story starts out okay following the well worn "abandoned by my party but I'm the glue that held it together" trope, it quickly falls on it's face and becomes an overpowered wish fulfillment without any of the benefit of characterization. The story plays out as if the main character found a genie's lamp with unlimited wishes containing no draw backs.Spoiler
Instead of settling down and developing the relationship between the first female lover after rescuing her (perhaps by going on an adventure and actually partying together as the title states), the author decides to drop 3 more women into the mix. Basically the women's husbands want to trade in their wives for a new model. Unfortunately, their wife has no value so they decide to give them to their kid brother because he likes it (yes - women are treated as objects in this story). Everything happens so fast that the women's characters are never developed. Later, 3 more women are added just for the sake of being added. The "influential people need to make a connection" trope is used.
[collapse]The author later realizes that they have made everything too easy. As a result, a ridiculous, "I want so I shall receive", McGuffin is added to explain past events when the main character is given a Super Saiyan equivalent mode.Reading the story is like watching a train wreck. You know it is not good but your curious about what s*upidity will happen next.