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Too many sideway details?Like, when explaining about traps in dungeons, then author proceed to also explain what a dungeon is in 2 pages worth of details, while at it, also explain about adventurers, also in multiple pages of details, then also explain about magic that can detect traps while also explaining about magic in general that also take multiple pages of explanation, after dozens of pages of explanation about random stuff, sometimes including flashback of some sort, it finally go back to the point with "anyway" then proceed with the actual point and conclusions about the topic traps in dungeons.I mean seriously, lack of details could be annoying, but this wild "while I'm explaining this, I'm gonna explain this and that too.." kind of details that stretch for pages seems a bit too unfocused and annoying to read after a while. More than once, I was actually like "Oh yeah, he was explaining that didn't he...".
