High School Hack and Slash Chapter 33 part3 Discussion

I'm not going to be too harsh with this, because it's very difficult to understand - the beginning chapters especially. I don't consider translation quality when reviewing as that wouldn't be fair to the work itself. The issue is that I can't tell if the difficulty stems from the author or the translation. EDIT: It seems that at some point or another the translation was cleaned up, perfectably legible now.

Plot wise it's interesting. I actually want to learn more about the setting and see how the characters interact with it, which is generally rare for smut novels. It's fun to learn about the various classes and their pros and cons. The social hierarchy, which hasn't been explored in depth yet, is intriguing from both a reader's and worldbuilding perspective. Most of all I want to learn more about the goals and motivations of whoever runs this academy.

Smut wise it can be hit or miss. A lot of girls have an "easy delivery type ass" so, uhh, that's probably hot. Maybe. Sometimes either positions are changed without informing the reader or everyone is Stretch Armstrong. There's another male in the protagonist's party, I can see this driving off a good amount of people, Spoiler

but he has his own girl and hasn't touched any of MC's.

[collapse] I know I only listed cons and oddities, but aside from these the smut is good.

Concerning NTR:

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There is once instance of NTR. However, this instance is an alt history chapter of the chapter right before it. Assuming the MC isn't the MC and is just another first year. This is the only chapter with anything involving alt history.

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Considering everything, I'm going to give it a 3.4. Right in the 3-4 range, but not quite enough to bump it to 4.