Deliverance of Counterattack Chapter Completed Discussion

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I must say, I don't want to be ungrateful but.. If the translation more polished this gonna be absolute bomb.. At least 4.0 minimum and 4.3 as maximum, MC and ML really well written for me, I mean we not just read about how ML dote MC.. Or how MC get all the love in the world (which is not, MC just loved by 1 ML and no 234ml, hate and like in this novel is clearly seperate there's no grey zone).. We will saw how the first-sight love became true love (although in that journey they had 3-4 drunk ssx lmao) but author didn't just buried it, they write about ML and MC insecure feeling, the misunderstanding is still ok for me, the problem solving is ok.. But this story also contains many hole and sometimes the pace is kinda to fast and just get lil jump. AND U ALL NEED TO KNOW THAT IT CONTAIN MANY SMUT AHAHAHAHHAHA but sadly as I said :) not to polished (trnnsltion) but it's ok u can understand it, 70%-80%if u never read a mtl, and 80%-95% if u had experience read mtl
 
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