yulric564 February 19,2025 #1 The story could be so much better if someone was proof reading. The word choice and flow is a little awkward. I’m going to have to put this on hold for now.But the story itself seems like just my cup of tea! Reply
The story could be so much better if someone was proof reading. The word choice and flow is a little awkward. I’m going to have to put this on hold for now.But the story itself seems like just my cup of tea!
