- #1
It's uninteresting and boringThe story goes on about factions and sh*t like that but the readers won't really care if it's just bland f*cking talking every chapter. Show don't tell. There's no consequences, just "If I do this, my lady will lose face" kind of thing. The premise of the story is good, but it doesn't need to be that boring; this could've gotten more recognition if it wasn't for the bland plot. I am hoping for action because there's only one fight scene throughout my read but if the author doesn't like the idea then dialogue could be the main source of dopamine. Dialogue can be a good source of entertainment but no, it's dry. Read if you like idea/plot holes and bland story telling. Trust me, you won't care about half the f*cking story.